9月4日GRE考后作文真题发布 高分思路写法详细分析
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Argument：
The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors.
"Over 80 percent of the respondents to a recent survey indicated a desire to reduce their intake of foods containing fats and cholesterol, and today low-fat products abound in many food stores. Since many of the food products currently marketed by Old Dairy Industries are high in fat and cholesterol, the company's sales are likely to diminish greatly and company profits will no doubt decrease. We therefore advise Old Dairy stockholders to sell their shares, and other investors not to purchase stock in this company.”
说得是关于销售高脂肪和高胆固醇食品的公司股东如何对待股票的问题。
重点逻辑反驳点可以是：
1. survey，关于证词类话题的讨论;
2. intention vs action：关于人们是都真的会如同调查中所说的改变自己的消费习惯
3. Old Dairy的innovation的问题：这家公司是不是已经有相关的市场策略。
Issue：
The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
本题是一道结构性很清楚的题目，大部分学生都会知道MOST effective的解题结构就是“承认合理性，指出相对缺陷，提出一个同等有用的方法”，结构清楚，其实重点就在语言上。
首先，Issue的写作，对于希望拿高分的同学来说非常重要，基本上作者是看到题目，思考了10秒就开始进行开头的写作，脑海中只有一个想法 “the essay length, fancy words and a sprinkling of random, esoteric facts all correlate with high essay scores.”事实上，文章的长度，华丽的用词以及偶尔掉个书袋都和高分文章紧密联系。
支持观点写法参考：
Born and raised in contemporary world, it is the young people who are most deeply influenced by values of contemporary world.Young people are more open to new ideas, while the middle-aged or elderly people are slow in reaction or even refuse to change.
In fact, almost every new fashion is led by young people, as can be seen from things they wear, programs they watch, language they use and even people they date
反对观点写法参考：
Young people's ideas are ususally not mature and will change over time,which makes their behaviors unpreditable and sometimes unreliable.Their ideas tend to be unstable and their bevaviors difficult to analyze.
It is the middle-aged or elderly people that take the most social resources and play the decisive role in a society.Ideas of the youth are often seen as being inapppropriate or rebellious, imcompatible with the dominant trend of contemporary culture. So the voice of the young is either suppressed or assimulated into the mainstream thoughts.
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