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GRE写作高分技巧:遣词造句实例改写

GRE作文想要取得高分,除了对文章整体结构的把握和了解,在遣词造句上也有不少值得注意的地方。下面就为大家介绍一些GRE写作高分的小技巧,结合实例改写帮助大家在词汇运用方法有所提升。


一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:

原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:

1) 原文:The team members are good players.

改写:The team members play well.

2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:

1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion.

改写:No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered.

改写:The books you ordered have arrived.


二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

例如:

1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk.

改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、原文:She is a careful shopper.

改写:She compares prices and quality.


三、尽量运用主动语态

例如:

1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity.

改写:Charity has supported the organization.

2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.


四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

例如:

1、原文:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

改写:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、原文:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

改写:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.


五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

例如:

1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.


以上就是关于GRE写作中如何通过一些遣词造句的小技巧提升作文水平的内容介绍,结合实例进行讲解,相信会对大家的写作提分有所帮助。


TIPS:重视GRE写作训练的多样化

“听、说、读、写”四种技能是相互依赖的,因而应该同时进行训练。学生只有进行大量听和读的训练,才能达到足够的规范的语言材料的输入,才能保证学生进行较好的说和写的语言输出。同时训练的多样化能够让学生更加有信心、有趣味地完成各项训练任务。例如,听过一段对话后,让学生用短文的形式记录下对话的主要内容,学过一篇较长的课文后,让学生对课文进行缩写或口头进行复述等等。进行各种训练的同时,要求学生注意人称、语态、时态、前后逻辑关系等的正确运用。这样既能锻炼学生语言的口头、书面表达能力,又能提高学生篇章结构的组织能力,从而提高写作能力。


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